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Post by Sarra on May 4, 2004 16:18:07 GMT
Any comments on 'The Dark before the Dawn' yet? I am very interested to hearing what you guys think.
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Post by The Wytch-King on May 4, 2004 16:32:48 GMT
Patience, youngster! An old man is no express train, after all.  No, seriously, I can understand your eagerness very well. I'd be anxiously hopping around my computer by now, were it my work. But alas, I have to work (should be back from my break already, in fact), therefore it'll take a bit of time. I'll be back with you as soon as I have well-founded comments, promise! (So far it looks interesting, but I haven't yet seen much.) The Wytch-King |
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Post by outspaced on May 4, 2004 16:56:22 GMT
I just sent you an e-mail regarding it with an attachment. I was going to read it earlier, but the formatting was so horrible (not your fault) that I couldn't. So I've spent the last half an hour or so fixing the formatting. Honestly! You Americans and your crazy 'letter' sized paper! I'm sending you back an A4 version of your gamebook in PDF format, just so you can see what I've done to it. |
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Post by Darkask on May 4, 2004 19:11:39 GMT
A notice: on section 102, I think you reversed your choices, so that when you evade, you get the win fight section and vice verse. Just a thought.
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Post by Sarra on May 4, 2004 19:28:05 GMT
A notice: on section 102, I think you reversed your choices, so that when you evade, you get the win fight section and vice verse. Just a thought. You are right. That was a mistake on my part. Sorry guys if there are typos and the such. I tried to smooth out all of the errors that I could find but I'm sure some still exist. I don't think there are any broken links thank God. But if there are any other problems I apologize ahead of time. |
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