The Dark before the Dawn 2.0

[Sarra]

I was very dissapointed in the Dark before the Dawn when it first came out. The format was less than acceptable and the numerous spelling errors were way too frequant.

Version 2.0 will be coming out in the next two weeks. It is completely revised. All the spelling errors have been fixed. Alot of stats have been tweaked. Errors in the description of the Magi Disciplines have been fixed.

A cover page has been added. Illustrations to many of the different sections have been added (thanks to this goes to KaiLord). I played through it to tweak alot of the stats accordingly. Winterhawk (Tower of the Sun) proofread all the sections. After he emailed me his suggestions, I fixed any problems and then proofread it again myself. The text has been changed to the classic Lone Wolf font.

To know when it shall be completed you may either consult www.towerofthesun.com or you may email me as always at [e-mail]. When it is completed you may email me and I will send it to you.

If you are a member of the Tower of the Sun website please download it directly from the site, it saves me alot of time and hastle sending email after email.

Thanks as always for the support guys, I hope you are impressed by the revisions that have undergone.

[Oiseau]

And of course -- I just thought I'd mention it -- I'll run through Version 2.0 and fix the French translation accordingly (assuming important text has changed, not just spelling mistakes, since I obviously didn't translate the typos ;D).

The Oiseau

[Sarra]

Well, I can tell you this much: there are alot of changes!

[outspaced]

Ronan said:

Well, I can tell you this much: there are alot of changes!

Are some of the changes going to be removing all occurrences of 'alot', since it isn't an actual word, and replacing them with 'a lot'?

[Sarra]

Yes, as well as the constant (and annoying) loose/lose typos.

All the changes have been made and completed for both 'The Dark before the Dawn' and 'The Cordon of Holmgard'. I am just waiting for KaiLord to finish his illustrations that he has graciously lent his time to.

[Sarra]

Well, it looks like The Dark before the Dawn 2.0 and The Cordon of Holmgard 1.5 are completed. I think that you will be impressed by the changes that have been made.

If you wish either or both suppliments please just email me at [e-mail]. They should be posted on the www.towerofthesun.com website and available for download by the end of the week.

Thanks all for your support.

Ronan