Book 5 Error

[Dave]

Hello in section 146, after picking random number(and possibly subtracting 2 based on Disciplines), the choices read:

If your total is now less than 2, turn to 44
If your total is now 3 or more, turn to 190

Well, if the total is exactly 2, it doesn't fit either of those statements! If it hasn't already been fixed, I'd suggest rephrasing the first choice to read:

"If your total is now 2 or less, turn to 44"

[outspaced]

Ah, another one of these. We'd hoped we'd fixed all of them, but clearly this one evaded us! Changed from "...less than 2..." to "...2 or less..."

Thanks, Dave!

[Dave]

Funny enough, section 301 has exactly the same issue: the instructions say "less than 4" or "5-9". I suggest changing to "4 or less".

[outspaced]

Good catch! Fixed in xml: "below 4" -> "4 or less".

You know, Seventh Sense is proving to be an excellent tool for editing purposes. You've spotted a couple of problems yourself, and by playing through Books 1-4 I've found-and-fixed-in-xml about 20 minor issues. What a haul!

If you'd like to use the development versions of the books (i.e. ZIP files based on the latest versions of the xml with all known problems fixed) drop me a PM and we'll see about sorting it out.

Cheers!